I've started a new fanfic, this time for Kuroshitsuji. The best way it can be summed up is "A pre-mangaverse story using characters from the second season of the anime".
Fact is, I was so damn pissed off at the ending of season 2 that I wanted to strangle a child. The characters for Season 2 were great, but were used and executed so poorly it was practically a crime. So one day, I was thinking random things and it came to me: "Why not use the same characters in a different but still relevant story?" That how I came up with this: Kuroshitsuji: Prelude
Now frankly. I know you dedicated Kuro fans out there are probably shaking your heads in complete shame at this idea. But frankly, I could care less. I don't care if you read it or not
, it's just one of those stories you develop so far and make it so fleshed out, that you have to write/type it, you know? About the story:
When Alois falls for Claude, it sets off a chain of events within the demon world that cannot be stopped, and leads to tragic consequences. Things it introduces:
Female Reapers Things it 'explains':
Classes/types of demons
The terms of Sebastian and Ciel's contract (and why it's there)
Rules (more like guidelines) of demons
Why the Reaper Dispatch has a pure white interior and exterior
Grell's love for red
William's despise for demons
Why female reapers only seem to work desk jobs
And a few others...
The story occurs when Ciel is only a few years old (Alois and Ciel never meet.) It will follow two 'stories', two 'worlds': Alois and Calude's story, as well as the story of the Reapers. Slowly, as things progress, the stories start to intertwine until they become one.
Alois's past would stay relatively the same. Claude's personality will have to be changed a little, because he never meets Ciel. Hannah would still be the 'Big Bad'.
I'll probably post this to FanFiction.net rather than post it on LJ. FF.net seems to have less... uber-dedicated, overly-protective fans to offend, you know?
But for now, I have the draft for the prologue. This is not worked out completetly, so obviously it's not beta'd. Tell me of any mistakes, please! (LJ eliminated my indents, and I can't seem to fix them, so forgive me! They'll appear on FF.net though.)
I swear to god this is the story, even if it doesn’t seem like it at first. You'll see what I mean if you read it. Read it to the end, or it doesn't make sense! ( There was no beauty in city filled with lights, cars, and thousands of people...Collapse )